Part 8 of Glimmer in the Dark has been uploaded

Excerpt from Part 8 (NSFW)

She was again on the verge of cumming when the nurse stopped, knelt down, and started applying a peculiar smelling white cream everywhere on Shine’s body, arms, legs, feet, hands, neck — but only gingerly to her face avoiding eyes, nose, and mouth.

“Wait here a bit please, and don’t rinse that off”, the nurse told her, “Also, uh, keep your eyes and mouth closed or that stuff might sting.”

Shine closed her eyes, not liking the cream’s pungent smell. She heard the nurse leave the room, close the door, thereafter she had to wait and wait. Minutes passed. Her skin where the nasty smelling cream had been applied was tingling. All over. Not unpleasantly either, but the opposite. The shower room was cooling too. The tingling began to become distracting, causing Shine to squirm sometimes. Her nipples swelled harder. Soon she was clenching and unclenching her hands, wanting to wriggle but not daring to wipe the cream off which the nurse had applied. The stuff was tingling and tickling everywhere on her skin from her toes, up her legs, between her legs, right over her pink bits, her clit ached and throbbed, her bottom-cheeks tickled too intensely, her tummy as well. Shine’s breasts tickled everywhere, the nipples especially.

She remained standing, eyes and mouth closed, but had to pant through her nose. The tickling-tingling was becoming nearly unbearable. She couldn’t help but make little mewling sounds occasionally. Shine wanted the nurse to hurry back. She tried walking around, but that caused the stuff to move around between her thighs and somehow intensified the sensation between her inner thighs and all over her pussy. Blindly, Shine reached out and found a handle on the wall to hold and steady herself.

Oh gaaaawd….. please… this is…., she begged in her mind, wanting to rush to rinse the stuff off but also trying to stay obedient to what the nurse had told her.

The tingles and tickling sensation kept growing in intensity, particularly strongest on her most sensitive areas. It was akin to being simultaneously pricked by millions of teeny-tiny pins and brushed over with thousands of feathers held by experts in tickle-torture. Shine wriggled as she held tight with her right hand to the handle on the wall, unable to tolerate it any more, she used her left hand to rub some of the cream away from her nipples and pussy. That didn’t alleviate the sensation, but instead apparently rubbed the stuff in deeper. Now her pussy and nipples were getting driven to greater extremes than the rest.

She groaned through closed lips, panting erratically and faster through her nose.

Pleeease…. Gawd… Steeriah…, Shine pleaded inside, I can’t take this!

Worse, some of the damnable cream had got directly onto her clitoris and labia when she’d foolishly tried to wipe it before. Her nips were on fire with the overpowering tickling and pinprick tingling. Her clit and petals below were waaaaay hotter with the maddening sensation. Every time Shine wriggled and writhed, she started to become aware that her movements were intensifying the effect, not reducing it. Perhaps that’s because she was perspiring too now, combining with the cream in a bizarre reaction. Yet, it was hard not to wriggle.

The door to the shower opened and closed.

“Sorry that I took so long”, the young nurse said.

Shine was too busy in her mind screaming for relief to answer. She was striving to stand stockstill, because the least movement might tip her over the edge. The millions of needles prickling and feathers tickling her super-sensitive skin everywhere had buried most of her ability to put two words together. Any second, Shine feared that she would collapse into the noisiest climax ever or start yelling in agony. She couldn’t distinguish any more.

“Okay, time to rinse you off”, said the nurse.

An instant later, powerful pulsing jets of hot water shocked Shine’s skin right over her clit, without any doubt, intentionally.

The orgasm that slammed through the teenager was like a tsunami made of lightning and heavenly delights. She came and came and came. Shine’s mind went blank, it was both gorgeous and nightmarish, because the orgasms kept having sequels — and everywhere the hot water jets hit her, was triggering more. She was certain that the nurse was deliberately aiming for her nipples, clitoris, her pussy, her arse, her underarms, her toes, her fingers, anywhere that was sensitive — but most especially often at her pussy and breasts and bottom. She wasn’t aware when her hand had let go off the handle on the wall, nor when she’d fallen down, but Shine gradually noticed that she was now half-laying with her back against the naked nurse. The shower nozzle aimed often at her pussy and breasts, while the nurse was sliding a pair of fingers in and out of Shine’s cunny. She’d orgasmed an uncountable number of times regardless the madness of the prickling and tickling cream was gone. Simply climaxing again and again while getting played with was practically relaxing by comparison. She opened her eyes and saw that her legs were parted as wide as they could go, straight out to each side.

“Uh… Wha… was . . . . that stuff?”, the teenage girl murmured, sounding child-like due to the slurring and sweetness of her voice.

“Oh, an organic depilatory and herbal skin softening blend which the matron makes at home, combined with… um…”, the nurse answered, “Uh… a refreshing mix of other herbs to enliven the circulation — it’s an ancient Chinese recipe, I’m told, very good for the skin.”

“Depi… Uum… Depili…”, Shine struggled with the word, her mouth had difficulty pronouncing anything.

“Depilatory… Removes all of the tiniest follicles of hair”, the young nurse explained, as her fingers continued fucking Shine’s cunt, sliding over her clitoris.

At the same time the nurse was hosing the nozzle around on Shine’s pussy and breasts.

“You’ll be smooth all over for days”, the young nurse told Shine, “Maybe weeks to be honest, I’m really not sure how long the effect lasts… and, um… besides, I put on heaps and… ah…. you had it on your skin for a lot longer than usual — oh well, you won’t have to worry about shaving your pussy hair or anywhere below your neck for awhile… You’ll be baby-smooth for ages, for sure.”

If you want to read the rest, it’s not free. Which is only fair since it takes weeks for me to write each Part of the story. Each of which is 7,000 to 10,000 words long. Part 6 was over 11,000 words long.

Shine Malloy is a teenage girl who wants to experience joyful and wonderful mysteries in her life. She wants to live in a world in which superheroes could really exist among us. She’s forgotten that could mean there are supervillains hiding among humanity as well.

Genres: Coming of Age, Superhero, Erotic Horror, Alternative World, Near-Future, Supernatural

Parts uploaded so far;

Part 1 (FREE TO READ)
             Aftermath of a Visit
             Just A Girl

Part 2 (FREE TO READ)
             A Manhunt
             When She Shines
             Fevered Nightmares
             A Ritual

Part 3 Mondays at the Malloys
           Why Can He Always? (Part-1)
            Friends

Part 4 Unseen She Sees
           Homework on Mondays
           Why Can He Always (Part-2)
           Study, Study, Study

Part 5 Unintentional It Was
          Colourful Business
          Betting on Weird

Part 6  Naughty Chocolate Muesli Bar
           (longer than usual, 11,000+ words)

Part 7  The Memorable Miss Ling
           (longer than usual, 12,000+ words)

Part 8  Hey Gigi, Have A Molly
            Playing Telegram

Dedicated my memories of Lovelynice  – wherever she may be. (I know, but I won’t say a thing)

Others who inspired me and helped my imagination soar and in no particular order; StephE2006, slavetomydesire, kongming, catcollection, JennyDreams, Fujiko, TentacleMonster, Sprocket, … honestly more than I can name – they were all members of the AdultAnimeRoleplay forums.

Thanks also to a very special fan, Eve Simpson. (Sorry, Google hates me and closed down my access to my Gmail account)

Why I use the handle OnlyTheGhosts

The following Author’s note applies to all of my stories:These stories can be sexually explicit, may have violence, horror, and controversial ideas. These stories aren’t suitable for minors. If you can’t accept the concepts in these stories, or are offended by them, or lack the mental maturity to be polite in your comments to me about these stories – then stop reading immediately. Nobody is forcing you to read what I write, so if you don’t like the story, then go elsewhere. These stories are works of fiction, and all characters are based on ones created in the author’s mind.